Day 6: Mogeko Castle

The first thing I immediately did when I saw this piece is compare it to the version that you showed me a day prior to see if there were any changes you made, and I'm honestly very much glad to see that there are.
All of the minor changes on parts like Yonaka's lower hand and the contrast on her clothes are a huge improvement, no longer having the smeared look that I saw in that aforementioned prototype version of this drawing.
Just like with the Dolphi picture from August of last year, the hair definitely benefits from this digital paintbrush style, looking absolutely stunning. Especially so on Yonaka's twin tails.
You definitely nailed the personalities and overall character of the two by their expressions alone! Especially Shinya, all red eyed and crooked smirked.
However, the shading on Yonaka's right shoulder (seen at our left direction) does feel a bit too dark given how it seems as through her entire body is under that light (or at least I assume that's a light source), and even though the hand I mentioned before does look much better, the sleeve of her arm seems just a bit too straight to be natural-looking.
I also feel that the way Shinya's arm bends looks more so like it's folding like it's flat rather than how a bent arm usually looks. Perhaps the clothing isn't folding enough to imply depth? I'm not entirely sure.
Yonaka's skirt could have also had a few improvements in the folding, especially since the brighter lines to give it the crossing grid look do make things a bit confusing to look at.
I perhaps might be nitpicking at this point, but like you said this Mogeko March will be great practice! Any little bit helps right?
Overall I think you did really well here! Can't wait to see what other Mogeko related stuff you might make this month.